Weekly WIP Status Report Time

So close! So very very close.

Last week, I mentioned that I would try to complete the novel within the next week. That didn’t happen. However, I still made some good progress. Eventually. I’m almost there!

As far as totals are concerned, I wrote almost 7,000 words this past week which gets me up to a total of 63,027 words. That puts me at a 90% completion. I really struggled with the last major scene which revolves around a battle. There are lots of little scenes that make up the big picture, and I was having trouble tying it all together, pacing it and getting all the right ingredients mixed together for it. But I think I figured out a way to make it work. Regardless, it’s written and I can always fix it during the editing phase if there are still problems with it.

I have the last chapter and a short Epilogue to write, wrapping up the last remaining plot threads. Then, that’s it. I’ll be finished…(!!).



Ending a Novel…

Isn’t easy.

The past few days I’ve been working on the end of my WIP. Let me tell you, this has been the hardest part so far. The beginning was a little clunky. The middle was a mixture of good and not so good. The section just before this flew out of my typing fingers like a breeze. And then suddenly, I’ve been hit by the inability to type more than a few hundred words before I feel exhausted. For this novel, I can usually write over a thousand before I start to feel creatively tapped.

I had a plan all along on how I wanted the novel to end, and here we are. But there are so many things to wrap up, and it’s such an important part of the book. Being the climax and all. Once I get past the climax, the last chapter will be pretty easy to write, but until then, arg!

The problem is that the ending is a huge battle scene. And while I know how it ends, I’m not sure all of the smaller steps that I need to take in order to get there. I know I should treat this part like the rest of the novel so far: It’s just a first draft. Get it down and then fix it later.

I’m just having trouble doing that right now. I don’t know if it’s end-of-novel anxieties or if it really is just tougher to write the end. Maybe it’s that I’m not very skilled in writing the endings because…well, I don’t finish things often. So, it’s a pretty new experience for me.

Endings are just so important. The beginning is what gets the reader interested. The middle is what keeps the reader interested. And the ending is what makes the reader interested in reading more of your work. All three are extremely important, and if I want to be a published author, it’s really important to get that third one down pat.

So, I’m just going to push through this problem I seem to be having and do the best that I can.



Interview with Tristi Pinkston

season.JPGToday, I would like to welcome Tristi Pinkston on her Blog Tour for her latest novel, Season of Sacrifice.

Welcome Tristi! I’m so glad you could stop by on your blog tour.

Thank you for having me. I appreciate it.

Your newest novel, Season of Sacrifice, is a true story based on the life of your great-great-grandfather. What inspired you to begin writing a novel based on his life?

He really lived the most fascinating life. Things happened to him that a fiction novelist struggles to invent, yet, these events were all real.
When I read the family history books that contained his story, I knew I had to write a book about it.

How did you perform your research for this novel?

It was the easiest research I’ve ever done. Because my ancestor was something of a Utah celebrity, and because his accomplishments were so incredible, many books have been written on the subject, and my dad happened to own them. I called my dad, told him I wanted to write the book, and he passed on to me his books and another family history book I hadn’t read yet. I spent about eighty hours reading those books, and another eighty writing the book, and felt like I’d gotten off easy. Usually I spend much longer researching and writing, but because my dad had all the information in one place, I didn’t have to go hunt it down.
Hooray for dads!

How did you come up with the title for Season of Sacrifice?

Okay, I’m kind of weird with titles. I like three words in my titles, and I like the second word to be a connecting word. My first published book is “Nothing to Regret,” my second is “Strength to Endure,” now we have “Season of Sacrifice.” Other books I’ve written but haven’t yet sold are “Test of Time” and “Faith Beyond Fear.” I’m also reworking one called “Worlds without End.” I don’t know why I like my titles constructed like that — I’m just kinda weird, I guess. “Season of Sacrifice” came about because truly, these pioneers I wrote about sacrificed over and over again. The title really seemed to fit.

Do you have any other upcoming projects?

Right now I’m finishing up a comedy/mystery that’s unlike anything I’ve ever written. It’s a joy to write and I didn’t have to research anything until page 100. Given that I typically write historical fiction which involves massive amounts of research, that was new and different for me.
I’ve also got about twenty other story ideas that are kicking around in my head, so you’ll be seeing a lot from me.

How did you get your novels published?

First, I looked at what I wanted to write, and I decided that for me, LDS historical fiction was perfect. I went to the library and wrote down the names of all the LDS publishers on the shelf who publish LDS historical fiction. I sent out some manuscripts, got rejected a couple of times, then I had a bite that looked really good but didn’t come through. I went to bed and cried for about two hours, and then I got mad, went to an all night Kinko’s, and ran off enough copies to send to every other publisher on my list. A short time later, I heard from Granite, who published my first two novels (I self-published Season of Sacrifice with the help of a good friend, BJ Rowley.) I’m glad I didn’t stay in bed crying.

Who are your favorite authors and who has influenced your writing the most?

I absolutely love the old classics. I’ve read “Little Women” probably eight times and have seen every movie version ever made (the Winona Ryder version is the best) so I definitely claim Louisa May Alcott as one of those favorite writers. Gene Stratton-Porter, L.M. Montgomery, Dodie Smith, and Jan Karon are other favorites. Each of these have influenced my writing. My sentence construction is old-fashioned and I have to keep working on that. I’ve also been compared to Corrie Ten Boom, but I don’t know if I dare aspire to that honor.

When did you first become a writer?

I’ve been writing since the age of five. My first thrilling novel was about a little dog named Sue who wanted to be a ballerina. I illustrated it myself. Then I went into my depressing poetry and really bad fantasy phase, in my teens. But it wasn’t until I was twenty-two that I started writing seriously. That’s when I wrote “Nothing to Regret,” my first published novel.

Do you have a special place or a special time that you write?

Now, in my dream world, I have a gorgeous office where I write, and I’ve already decorated it in my mind. Cherry wood furniture, rose carpet, cream and rose wallpaper, and I even know what paintings will hang there.

Oh, you mean in real life. My “office” is a desk in the corner of my living room. I have four children and I homeschool, so I essentially have to be in the middle of things all the time. I tried putting my desk in my bedroom, but it was too tempting to just stay in there and never come out. I do the bulk of my writing after nine o’clock at night and up to around two am. The kids are asleep and it’s quiet.

What do you do when you aren’t writing?

I try to catch up on sleep . . . and I homeschool, write media reviews for Families.com, volunteer with the Cub Scouts, I own my own bath and beauty supply company, I love to scrapbook, watch good movies, and read good books.

And finally, what advice can you give for aspiring writers?

Sit down and do it. Stop second guessing yourself, just get it out on the page and stop talking about the book you’re going to write. Do it, and then talk about the book you’ve written. Read a lot, write a lot, and don’t be too prideful to accept criticism and make changes where needed.

Thanks Tristi, I’m so glad you could stop by! I wish you the best of luck with your new novel!

You are so very welcome. I’m glad I could be here.

Sarah Williams is a young Welsh immigrant, coming to Utah to join her sister Mary Ann Perkins. When the Perkins are asked to join the San Juan mission to pioneer a trail through Southern Utah, they take Sarah along to help care for the children. But a six-week journey turns into six agonizing months of hard work and toil as the Saints blast their way through a cliff to bring their wagons through what would become the famous Utah landmark “Hole in the Rock.”

Finally settled in the San Juan, Sarah’s true hardship begins when Ben Perkins asks her to be his second wife. With their faith and testimonies challenged to the core, both Sarah and Mary Ann struggle to find the true meaning of Christ-like love and obedience. Will they make it through?



Mixing Reading and Writing

tithe.jpgWhile I’ve been working on this novel, I’ve been reading as well. On the train, before sleep and when I’m too tired to concentrate on writing. I’ve read Libba Bray,  Mark Henry, Holly Black and Lisa Lutz. By the way, all of those authors are amazing.

This was working out just fine until a couple of weeks ago.

When I’m reading, I get really drawn into the story. So drawn in that I started feeling like it was affecting the style of my writing. And I’ve realized that some small components of my style have shifted over the course of this WIP. I think part of that has to do with the array of books I’ve read during all of this. I’m almost certainly going to need some strong editing skills in getting the narrator’s style to match throughout the book.

So, I basically stopped reading. Or not reading much. Eeek! I’m glad I’m nearing completion because it’s hard for me to go very long without reading something. I just don’t want to sound like another author, let alone five or six of them.

Do you read while you are working on a novel? Do you feel like it affects your style? If you do read, how do you get past this? Inquiring minds want to know.



This Week’s WIP Status

This past week didn’t come close to measuring up to last week’s progress, but I’m still pretty happy with what I completed. I wrote a little over 7,000 words, giving me 56,113 words total. Not bad for such a hectic week.

Now, I’ve also realized that this first draft probably won’t make it to 75,000 words. Instead, I’ve cut it back to 70,000. There are spots in the novel where I know I will need to go back and flesh out a bit. There might even be an extra scene I need to add in later. I’m waiting until the first draft is complete to do that though. So, while my first draft will be shorter than expected, I still plan on meeting the 75,000 word total after edits.

What does that mean? I have less than 14,000 words left to complete the first draft. Which seems about right with what I know I have left in the story. Do I dare say it? This week, my goal is to write at least 2,000 words every day in order to complete the novel by next Sunday night. Something that I can definitely do.

The End - It’s so close!



May Giveaway: Signed Succubus in the City by Nina Harper!

succubus.jpgI’m a little late in posting the monthly book giveaway for May, but here it is!

This month’s giveaway is a signed copy of Succubus in the City by Nina Harper. I met her at Comic Con, and she was sweet enough to hand over an extra signed copy. I haven’t read my copy yet, but I’ve heard a buzz around the blogosphere that it’s a fun paranormal romance.

Leave a comment below to enter the giveaway. This month, I will be picking a winner at 7pm on Sunday, May 11th.



Back to Writing

After a pretty hectic past couple of days, things are starting to settle down. I think I’ve found an apartment. I hope I’ve found an apartment. There’s still some paperwork and a whole approval process that I have to go through before I can actually call it my own.

In all the Craigslist and Realtor searches, apartment showings, budget analyzing, stressing, neighborhood researching, etc, I took yesterday completely off from writing and the blog. I needed a breather. Luckily, I’ve already found something I really like. Crossing my fingers on actually getting it.

So, tonight I’m back to working on the WIP.  Just one day off, and I already feel a bit distanced from the story. I’m hoping I can get back on track and at least make some significant process tonight and the rest of the weekend.

Oh, and I will be posting about a giveaway tomorrow morning! So, check back for a signed copy of a great book.



Distractions

Today was a pretty unproductive day for writing. I had some cat issues to deal with, and I’ve been doing some apartment hunting.

So, unfortunately, I haven’t progressed much in the WIP. I have a feeling tomorrow will be the same unless I try to wake up earlier than usual and do some writing before work.

Oh well. We all have these days.



Agent Research

With less than a quarter of the WIP left to write, I’ve been doing a little agent research. I’m using several online tools and putting the agents I find interesting into an Excel spreadsheet. When I’m ready to start querying (and I’ve already worked on the query letter), I’ll have all my info ready. Then, I’ll keep track of who I query and any partial or full requests with the spreadsheet.

I’ve found my info in three locations:

1. QueryTracker.net 

2. Agent Query 

3. And my blog buddy, B.E. Sanderson’s own research post

From all three places, I’ve found a healthy number of agents that I think will be a great fit for me and this particular WIP. I’ve been looking at genre preferences, clients, location and other info. I list all of that in the spreadsheet with contact information, query requirements and mailing preference. Of course, I prefer to e-mail, but not all clients accept e-mail queries.

This has also been great motivation for finishing the book. It makes me want to get started on the query process! I’m sure my first rejection will be tough (and the second, and the third, and the fourth), but maybe one of these won’t be a rejection. But I’ll never find out if I don’t try.



My Weekly WIP Status Report!

Last week, I posted that I wanted to write 10,000 words in a week to reach a total of 43,000 words. Well, I’m amazed to tell you that I not only reached that, but also surpassed it. I’m now at a total of 48,757 words. I wrote over 15,000 words this past week!

So, that means I only have about 25,000 words left to write for this first draft. And I can see the end on the horizon which is an incredible feeling. I think part of the reason the words have been flowing so well is due to this. The end is in sight, and I’m working hard to get through that finish line.

I’m starting the fourth and final “act” of my plot tomorrow night, since I’m using the four act structure. It’s exciting to be this far along after almost four months of working on this one, and I don’t want to jinx it but…it isn’t going to be much longer before I type the words, “The End.”